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BrewKnowC
01-14-2004, 12:46 PM
Hi, I use BMT Micro for my online transactions and they made a custom buy page for "Trials of Werlin". It just feels like something is missing to make it look more professional. I think they will edit it pretty much anyway I need, but I'm not sure what would be best. Maybe it needs a money-back guarantee graphic or a secure transaction graphic? any advice on the subject is appreciated. Thanks

Oops, almost forgot to link to the buy page:
Buy Page (http://www.bantamcity.com/werlin/order.html)

WildSnake
01-14-2004, 01:10 PM
Oops, almost pressed Submit at your order page :D

No, Bruno. I can't count any problems. Order page is looking absolutely appropriate... Very stylish and accurate.

I'd doubt if order page should be kind of part of whole website - too many disturbing factors. But this is really up to your vision.

So, good luck...

BrewKnowC
01-15-2004, 04:23 AM
Originally posted by WildSnake
I'd doubt if order page should be kind of part of whole website - too many disturbing factors. But this is really up to your vision.

WildSnake, I'm not really sure what you mean. Do you mean the buy page looks too much like my site, or do you mean that I shouldn't make it look exactly like my site?

Does anyone else have any comments? :)

Thanks

WildSnake
01-15-2004, 09:37 AM
Well. While you are waiting for additional comments you are welcome to visit our order page to imagine clear what I mean...

We had removed all menus from order page but left the same style.

elund
01-15-2004, 12:06 PM
I think it looks pretty good, Bruno. What about your order page looks unprofessional? I agree with WildSnake that you should probably remove extraneous buttons from the order page, not because it's more professional, but rather to remove any incentives that steer people away from completing the order. I did something similar with my order page:

Home page (http://www.gearhand.com)
Order page (http://www.gearhand.com/order/buy.html?game=bhz&mode=now)

cliffski
01-15-2004, 12:53 PM
I'd dump the multiple copies button, just to simplify it. Also do you really need peoples telephone number? I'd skip that too if you can. Im very wary of giving out information like that in a web form.

BrewKnowC
01-15-2004, 01:45 PM
I just made a few changes to a fake sample page... do you think this looks better or worse?

New Buy Page Sample (http://www.bantamcity.com/forms/bmtmicro/sample.html)

WildSnake
01-15-2004, 04:10 PM
Bruno,
While you are waiting additional feedback...
I took a look at your site in common. I suppose it would be great for you to order outside site design on some stage.

But may be you consider at least to use these buttons for "download" and "buy":
www.wildsnake.com/pinball/invasion/screenshots/Buttons.jpg
Probably they are more appropriate to your current site appearance. (?)

Well. (We had 10 logs to these buttons in first ten minutes). Description - to not kill our traffic. :D
File contains two very simple blue glass buttons. Nothing more :D

BTW, we are NOT doing any outside designs. Just had my own project opened and used your wallpaper. :D

BrewKnowC
01-16-2004, 05:06 AM
Wow, thanks WildSnake, the buttons look great.

Does anyone like the new buy page better? or think I should stick with the current one?