Greetings,

I have recently launched my official shareware business along with a new product called Kidsafe and a new release of my existing game called Dreamstars.

This has been a pretty big overhaul and I am hopeing things are looking really great but I'd love any feedback you guys have to offer.

If you are keen then please start here:

www.jaishaw.com (http://www.jaishaw.com)

Thank you in advance.

Nice, simple, clean layout. Perhaps a little too simple? But certainly not offensively designed. But:

About: eithically should be ethically
About Kidsafe: Infinate should be infinite

And the sexy Malara looks very obviously like some randomly chosen pencil sketch which has nothing to do with the game (it's pretty clear she's actually a design drawing for a fantasy game or similar).

Front page doesn't work right for me - the text doesn't wrap, the news items are cut off. So I can't read most of it. (IE 5.0, yes, I have an outdated browser. I fear updates, they tend to break things.)

Of what I can read:
"Kidsafe if an educational game" should be is
"Genisis of this site." Genesis.

The Kidsafe demo ran at like 1 frame per second on my athlon 1.2 and a GeForce 2 card, and holding ctrl and typing "exit" didn't work - perhaps because of the low framerate. Also, you might want to work on brightening the colors - yellows, reds, etc... I don't know how long the muted colors will hold my two year old's attention. Of course, with a 5 minute trial time, there's no way for me to know. Better to make it a 60 minute total trial instead of 5 minutes at a time. When I'm buying a kids program, I'm looking for something that will keep my son interested for more than 5 minutes. Finding Nemo is great for that (though he's starting to lose interest). With me, that's what your competing against ;)