Guys!


Here is just-new-born-game

http://www.wonderspecie.com/erp1megabomber.html

The direct download link is

http://www.wonderspecie.com/downloads/megabomber.exe

All comments are welcome!!


Regards,
UglyDuck.

Hi, Uglyduck. I just tried your game and I think It's got potential to be really fun. However, as it is now, it needs quite a bit of polishing. Some aspects I think need work are:

- Characters animations: Especially those of the main character.

- GUI: It's a bit... DOSsy. I mean, it remembers me of quite old games (placement of buttons, graphics, color used.) The font you used for texts is not very readable.

- Scenary graphics: They're too square, you should try making edges less hard.

- Tutorial: That help screen is not enough. You should include some sort of in-game tutorial. It doesn't need to be an explicit tutorial, just some very easy levels at the beginning, which present items, weapons and enemies step by step

- Weapons: I'm presented with a wide selection of weapons at the begining and (maybe because of lack of a tutorial) I don't know what to buy. Weapon descriptions don't help, they're to long and beat around the bush; be concise and just inform in a few word what the weapon effect is.

- Text: I guess English is not your native language... Some texts are really hard to undersand. It's very important that you fix this.

Please, don't be put off by all this I said. I really think your game could be really great with some improvements here and there. I hope my criticism helps you make it better.

Thank you we have to use your remarks for improvement!!!

I wonder where can I find good proofreader?

may be you have had some guys (native english speakers) who corrects game texts?

Originally posted by UglyDuck
may be you have had some guys (native english speakers) who corrects game texts?

Me? Well, I'm not 100% sure texts in my game are correct... However I've been studying English since I was 9, so my English is pretty good.

I'm sure you'll find an English native speaker in this forum with enough time to lend you a hand. Why don't you make another thread asking for it?