Me - The Game

Discussion in 'Feedback Requests' started by Jack the Creative, Mar 25, 2017.

  1. Jack the Creative

    Jack the Creative New Member

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    Hi guys, this is my metaphorical platform game:

    online demo

    Thank you in advance for your attention, feedback always very appreciated!!

     
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  2. Osmosis D. Jones

    Osmosis D. Jones New Member

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    The idea is very creative!
    I played a few seconds and i really like the trap :)
    Great programming and designing work.
    The look is a little strange, maybe because the background is just white. I think i get why it is like that, but it looks like there is something missing.
    First to mention I m not a gaming much and think I m not in the target ground but i just want to mention that i think i wont play it again. This is not meant rude in any way I just hope this all is some feedback that helps.

    Good work, much luck, and greetings
    Os
     
  3. DefiniteGoose

    DefiniteGoose New Member

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    Hello Jack!

    The first thing I notice is that the buttons do not feel "clickable" to me on the start menu, I guess that's just me. The music sounds very nice, and I love the gameplay! The text tells you what to do, and it is very creative. I have played through the first bit and I want to let you know that you have potential and that you should never give up! Good luck on the development of the game.

    Regards,
    DefiniteGoose
     
  4. Jack the Creative

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    Thank you very much guys, I'll implement some suggestions!
     

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